idle muse

Really nice imagery. Perhaps it's just me, but I felt like the poem was missing a line. It seemed to cut off very abruptly. Still, very well written, and an ...

Simple but effective. I liked it! But if you're going to use dots at the end of a line, make it three. Having more makes it look very amateurish. But ...

It annoyed me how very preachy it became. I hope the next one makes up for it!

Haunting. That gets a gold star from me :D

I thought it was good. I can't really critique it, but yeah, I thought it was witty.

Very sad, very poignant and very well written. I liked it.

Thanks for all the positive feedback! It really is appreciated.

Centre is the correct form of spelling in British English. And yes, they are gay, why?

Very nice, I enjoyed reading that.

Thanks. I know I flit from tense to tense a bit, I'll change that now. I really appreciate all the feedback :D

I didn't like this book nearly as much as the others. It suddenly became incredibly preachy and moralist. Still it was definitely not a bad book. I just hope the ...

Sequel series? Excuse me while I go somewhere far away from people so I can squee in private :) And yes, brilliant series.

I know what you mean about the third stanza, that line didn't quite sit with me either. And I promise, this is an completely original work :)

Dark and powerful. Excellent!